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Re: Genart review of draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-05 / draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-05




Hi Ron,

Thanks for the review, see below for some answers

Ron Bonica wrote:

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for:
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-05
          -and-
draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-05


For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track document,
except for the following nit:


In fact, the 2 documents are informational.

- The client MIB contains a note to the RFC editor about the reference
[DYNSERV]. However, there is no such reference.


I checked it and the client MIB is Ok, in the server MIB it seems that the RFC ed note is incorrect and [DYNSERV] should be replaced by [DYNCLNT]. The references in both of the drafts are correct, with the exception of the RFC ed note in the server MIB.


And two substantial questions:

- Can I assume that it has passed MIB Rx Review? (It compiles clean).


Not sure what MIB Rx review is. I compliled the MIB with Smilent.

- Should this MIB *ever* be used in conjuntion with SNMPv1? I know that
you *recommend* against it. But it seems that divulging the information
in this mib to a hostile party might be pretty bad.


http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-security.html contains preformatted text for the security section and that text was put in the draft. See the text on that webpage in the section "-- else if there are no read-write objects in your MIB module". The text in the draft is more or less a copy/paste from that webpage. Also the other Radius MIBs like draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-03.txt are also following the guidelines on the mentioned webpage.

regards,
Stefaan


                                      Ron



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