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Re: draft-zhao-opsec-routing-capabilities-01.txt



Comments inline.   See gmj2>.

Ross, you will have to get rid of MUST/MAY/SHOULD in misc caps as well.

---George

On 6/2/06, Zhao Ye <yezhao@huawei.com> wrote:


>Comments in attached .doc file.   Good start.   Needs some structural
tweeking to be in line with the framework.
>I'll help with conversion to an xml2rfc format if you like.


Hi George,

I modified some places according to your comments. I followed your advice
about "route flap".
I think we could find a proper definition and add it into your framework
draft.
I also added some questions in it and hope to know your opinion about them.

I will appreciate if you help to convert the document to an xml2rfc format.
I heard of this tools before, but have not used it ever.
Thanks for your help again.

Best regards.

Zhao Ye

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