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Re: I-D Action:draft-nadeau-ccamp-gmpls-oam-requirements-02.txt



Hi Tom,


Yes, I find this version clearer.

Good. Thanks.

I was struck by two semantic changes, for which I am happy to leave any
discussion to when it is a WG I-D. One is the change of the first sentence from
'This document describes requirements for data plane OAM for GMPLS'
to
'This document describes requirements for control plane OAM for GMPLS'
which sounds quite a change. In practice, this does not reflect a dramatic change of contents, but then again, I do not think either sentence gets it quite
right.

This tackled a comment from Don O'Connor.

I think the essence of Don's point was that the techniques being described were not data plane OAM. In fact, while we may leverage data plane OAM, for most (all?) technologies with which we are dealing, the data plane OAM is already defined (stroke being defined) by other bodies or other working groups.

We'd be happy to see another formulation of this text.

Second, I notice a much stronger emphasis on (SNMP) MIB modules; I presume it is
too early to accommodate other forms, such as the nascent NETCONF.

Ah. Hmm.

As you say, NetConf is nascent. It would be a trifle premature to *require* NetConf conformance. In fact, the requirements would perhaps be a little more abstract (e.g., "standardised tools for operational management") if there wasn't also the general IETF "SHOULD" applied to the development of MIB modules for all protocols and protocol extensions.

Cheers,
Adrian