More comments on notifications-03

[Balazs Lengyel <balazs.lengyel@ericsson.com>]

Hello
Some more comments on the draft. Sorry if some are due to my misunderstanding of the draft.

Chapter 3.2.5.3 page 16)
annotation/documentation states this is a schema for event streams
10 lines lover nm:description states
A schema that can be used to learn about current Netconf Event subscriptions and creating 
named profiles
Which is true ?

Chapter 3.3)
First sentence states that subscriptions don't exist in datastores, then in 3.4 we define 
a schema to read about them. If they don,t exist how can you read them ?
My guess is that you either have to drop the schema or explain it a bit more.

Chapter 4, page 26, Symmetrical operations)
There is </xs:element> in the schema for which I do not find the corresponding opening tag.

Chapter 4, page 26)
I don't really understand the schema defining one-way operations. Is it complete? Where do 
you put your own data?

Chapter 5.2.1.1)
This is the only, single place where rpc-one-way is mentioned. Either remove it or explain 
it some more.

regards Balazs

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