RE: [AVT] Comments on draft-ietf-avt-rtcp-xr-mib-02

["Romascanu, Dan \(Dan\)" <dromasca@avaya.com>]

Bert,

This sounds like a proposal to change the MIB documents boilerplate. 

Comments?

Dan

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Magnus Westerlund [mailto:magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com] 
> Sent: Wednesday, August 03, 2005 5:19 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> Cc: IETF AVT WG; Alan Clark; Amy Pendleton; Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> Subject: Re: [AVT] Comments on draft-ietf-avt-rtcp-xr-mib-02
> 
> Okay, then it shouldn't be changed.
> 
> However, I thought the way of referencing was bulky and one 
> can easily get the impression that there is some error with 
> the repeated STD number, instead of it being one standard 
> described in several RFCs.
> 
> I think something like the below would be more easy to read. 
> I could even thing to simply go to the [] references. But 
> that probably is an issue if one would use numbered references.
> 
>     This memo specifies a MIB
>     module that is compliant to the SMIv2, which is described 
> in STD 58
>     (RFC 2578 [RFC2578],RFC 2579 [RFC2579] and RFC 2580 [RFC2580]).
> 
> 
> Cheers
> 
> Magnus
> 
> 
> Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote:
> > Actually this text MUST be past-and copied from 
> > http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-boilerplate.html.
> > 
> > But. As it is being stated there:
> > 
> >  In general, if you think this text needs changes, please send an 
> > email message to the ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org mailing list or to the 
> > responsible Area Director, Bert Wijnen.
> > 
> > Regards,
> > 
> > Dan
> > 
> > 
> >  
> > 
> > 
> >>-----Original Message-----
> >>From: avt-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:avt-bounces@ietf.org] On 
> Behalf Of 
> >>Magnus Westerlund
> >>Sent: Wednesday, August 03, 2005 4:36 PM
> >>To: IETF AVT WG; Alan Clark; Amy Pendleton
> >>Subject: [AVT] Comments on draft-ietf-avt-rtcp-xr-mib-02
> >>
> >>Hi,
> >>
> >>Mostly editorial comments:
> >>
> >>1. Section 1: Could you please write the reference to STD 58 in 
> >>another way. For example: STD 58 (RFC 2578, 2579, and 2580).
> > 
> > 
> > 
> > 
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> 
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