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Re: MIB Dr. review for draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-13.txt




	One question below.

Hello Tom and Adrian,


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Here are my few comments:

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-13.txt

(#1 should be taken care of the others are NITs and
could probably be fixed by RFC Editor if you so choose.)

1)  Think this was probably a place holder...but
please just remove this:

     OBJECT       gmplsLabelRowStatus
     SYNTAX       RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2) }
     WRITE-SYNTAX RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2),
                              createAndGo(4), destroy(6) }
     DESCRIPTION
       "TDN QUestion"

	Thanks for catching this. I remember why I left this.
I was confused by your comments on this, which were:
9) Full Compliance:

     OBJECT       gmplsLabelRowStatus
     SYNTAX       RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2) }
     WRITE-SYNTAX RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2),
                              createAndGo(4), destroy(6) }
     DESCRIPTION
       "Support for createAndWait and notReady is not required."


Would remove this.


The description or the entire object?


Presumably the Description limitation based on the text below.


Based on the
gmplsLabelRowStatus object's DESCRIPTION
believe you should allow createAndWait and also
Agent could/should be able to report notReady.

	Based on what is listed in RFC3813, for example,
we have the following:

   OBJECT       mplsInSegmentRowStatus
   SYNTAX       RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2) }
   WRITE-SYNTAX RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2),
                            createAndGo(4), destroy(6)
                          }
   DESCRIPTION "Support for createAndWait and notReady is
                not required."

	I guess I am looking for some explicit instruction on
what you would like to see in the DESCRIPTION for the
gmplsLabelRowStatus in the FullCompliance statement.

2) NIT

         January 2003;
        "

Please change this to:


            January 2003."


3) Informative References

NIT:

Change the order so references are in
ascending order:

Current order is:

   [RFC3472]


   [RFC3468]

change to:

   [RFC3468]

   [RFC3472]


NIT:
Fix reference:

Current:
   [RFC3468]    Andersson, L., Swallow, G., "The Multiprotocol Label
                Switching (MPLS) Working Group decision on MPLS
                signaling protocols", RFC 3468, February 2003.

Should be:

   [RFC3468]    Andersson, L. and G. Swallow, "The Multiprotocol Label


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	OK, fixed the above nits.

	--Tom