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MIB Dr. review for draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-13.txt



Hello Tom and Adrian,


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Here are my few comments:

draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-13.txt

(#1 should be taken care of the others are NITs and
could probably be fixed by RFC Editor if you so choose.)

1)  Think this was probably a place holder...but
please just remove this:

     OBJECT       gmplsLabelRowStatus
     SYNTAX       RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2) }
     WRITE-SYNTAX RowStatus { active(1), notInService(2),
                              createAndGo(4), destroy(6) }
     DESCRIPTION
       "TDN QUestion"

2) NIT

         January 2003;
        "

Please change this to:


            January 2003."
                        

3) Informative References

NIT:

Change the order so references are in
ascending order:

Current order is:

   [RFC3472]  


   [RFC3468] 

change to:

   [RFC3468] 

   [RFC3472]  


NIT:
Fix reference:

Current:
   [RFC3468]    Andersson, L., Swallow, G., "The Multiprotocol Label 
                Switching (MPLS) Working Group decision on MPLS 
                signaling protocols", RFC 3468, February 2003.

Should be:

   [RFC3468]    Andersson, L. and G. Swallow, "The Multiprotocol Label 


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