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Re: AD review of: draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt (fwd)

Hi Jim,
Many thanks for looking it over...

[snip...]
These are very minor nits at this point, so no need to resubmit just
for this at this time.

Ok, I will go ahead fix what've suggested below but will not resubmit at this time.
> 1. ID-nits check:
> $ idnits-v1.24 <drafts/draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt
> idnits 1.24, 16 Apr 2004, 07:05
>
> Line 479 contains non-ascii character in position 29.
> --> network. This allows SP1Æs customers connected to SP2 PE router to
> ^

still not fixed, please do so.

I thought I did... Will do.

> 2. Pls remove section: draft-ietf-tewg-interas-mpls-te-req-06.txt
>    This makes no sense once it gets to "Publication requested" stage.

Not done, please remove
"Summary for Sub-IP related Internet Drafts"
to
"interoperable with current intra-AS traffic engineering mechanisms."


Will do, thanks...
>

> 6. Lots of acronyms are used without being expanded the first time thye
>    are used.

I trust you took this into consideration

Yes... I've gone through all of them and expanded where it is needed.


>
> 7. Sect 6.1 .... MMM.... what does it really mean?
>    It is so flexible, that ... oh well ...
>
> 8. End of sect 6.2 says:
>       Other criteria might be added as this draft will evolve.
>    while this draft is now "complete", no?

Section 6 is gone now, which should address (7) and (8).
What is stated, is what is required.

Right...

Thanks once again.

Regards,
Raymond