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AD evaluation of: draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-mam-01.txt
- To: "Tewg (E-mail)" <te-wg@ops.ietf.org>
- Subject: AD evaluation of: draft-ietf-tewg-diff-te-mam-01.txt
- From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>
- Date: Wed, 17 Dec 2003 17:15:36 +0100
Here are my review comments:
More or less serious:
- I believe that not the base protocol document should request
assignment of a BC Model ID, but instead this document should
do so.
Nits/admin
- tell RFC-editor to remove the section about SUB-IP related
information. Or better remove it in next revision.
- If we decide that this doc requests assignment of BC Model ID
(which is my preference) then we need an IANA Considerations
section.
- Although an IPR statement (RFC2026, sect 10) is not mandatory, it would
be good to add one. Certainly if we plan to move one or more
of the BC models to stds track in the future.
- Try to be consistent with the base protocol spec in that you use the
same capitalization/spelling for "Bandwidth Contraints Model".
There are possibly other such strings/prhases as well that could
benefit from more consistency.
Thanks,
Bert