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Re: RAP Working Group Re-chartering




>>>>> Hahn, Scott writes:

Scott> Juergen, I think you are reading more into this than there
Scott> is. This paragraph refers to the ongoing SPPI and Framework
Scott> PIB. The SPPI is at the hands of the IESG.  The framework PIB
Scott> went through WG last call, but resulted in a few minor changes
Scott> and I believe will do another last call. These were left in the
Scott> charter because the work is still going on. It is *not* another
Scott> SPPI.

OK, I now understand what the text was trying to say. Perhaps the
charter text on this point could be simplified as follows:

  - Complete work on standards track documents for (a) the data
    definition language for COPS-PR [SPPI] and (b) the set of core
    data definitions for QoS policy provisioning [FRWKPIB].

This text would have been much clearer to me.

/js