Re: My Suggestions regarding the RADIUS Design Guidelines Document

[Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com>]

Hannes Tschofenig wrote:
> I was asked what specifically has to be changed in the document in order to
> address my comments. Here is a short summary: 
> 
> 1) Shorten Section 2 and Section 3 considerably. I believe that readability
> can be improved by shortening the text. Funny enough the right text is
> already in the draft, namely in the appendix. I am proposing a new structure
> at the bottom of this mail. 

  On a quick scan, it looks good.

> 2) Be precise what you mean by "basic" vs. "complex" attribute

  "basic" == "defined (mostly) in an existing RFC"

  "complex" == "everything else".

> Section 2 is quite fuzzy in it's description. I would instead re-use the
> text you have in the appendix. 

  OK.

  Alan DeKok.

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