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RE: Review Request for draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt
Thanks, Kam.
Dan
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lam, Hing-Kam (Kam) [mailto:hklam@lucent.com]
> Sent: Saturday, May 06, 2006 7:41 PM
> To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org
> Cc: Orly Nicklass
> Subject: RE: Review Request for draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt
>
> Dan,
>
> Here is the promised Transport Protocols review of Orly's
> recently-submitted document draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt.
> Since RFC 3895 itself went through a review, I focused mainly
> on the things that have changed since RFC 3895.
>
> In conclusion, only some editorial updates for the references
> are needed. The rest of the document is okay. The needed
> editorial updates are:
>
> Globally change "CCITT" to "ITU-T".
>
> On Page 5, change "G.704 Table 5b" to "G.704 Table 5B".
>
> On Page 5, change "G.704 Table 5a" to "G.704 Table 5A".
>
> On Page 30, change "(Table 5b)" to "(Table 5B)".
>
> On Page 30, change "(Table 5a)" to "(Table 5A)".
>
> On Page 31, change
> "CCITT Specifications Volume III, Recommendation G.703,
> Physical/Electrical Characteristics of Hierarchical Digital
> Interfaces, April 1991."
> to
> "ITU-T Recommendation G.703,
> Physical/Electrical Characteristics of Hierarchical Digital
> Interfaces, November 2001."
>
> On Page 75, change "Table 4a" to "Table 5A".
>
> On Page 81, change "Table 4a" to "Table 5A".
>
> On Page 87, change "Table 4a" to "Table 5A".
>
> In the normative reference section, change "CCITT
> Specifications Volume IV, Recommendation"
> and
> "CCITT Specifications Volume III, Recommendation" (several
> occurences) to "ITU-T Recommendation"
>
> In the normative reference section, in [ANSI-T1.231], change
> "-- Layer 1"
> to
> "DS1 -- Layer 1"
>
> Regards,
> Kam
>
>
>
>
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org
> > [mailto:owner-ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org]On
> > Behalf Of Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
> > Sent: Monday, April 10, 2006 4:55 PM
> > To: ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org
> > Cc: Orly Nicklass
> > Subject: Review Request for draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt
> >
> >
> >
> > The author of draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt required
> that this
> > document be processed as an independent submission
> sponsored by the AD
> > to become a standards track document.
> >
> > I believe that there is a need for a couple of expert
> reviews in order
> > to ensure that the document is at the proper quality level for
> > standards track. C.M. Heard volunteered to perform a MIB Doctor
> > Review, and Kam Lam volunteered to help with the transport
> Protocols
> > review.
> >
> > The reviewers and all other parties interested in this work are
> > invited to send their comments to ietfmibs@ops.ietf.org
> until May 2nd,
> > 2006 the latest.
> >
> > Dan
> >
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Internet-Drafts@ietf.org [mailto:Internet-Drafts@ietf.org]
> > Sent: Monday, April 10, 2006 10:50 PM
> > To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Subject: I-D ACTION:draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> >
> >
> > Title : Definitions of Managed Objects for the DS1,
> > J1, E1, DS2 and E2 Interface Types
> > Author(s) : O. Nicklass
> > Filename : draft-orly-atommib-rfc3895bis-00.txt
> > Pages : 110
> > Date : 2006-4-10
> >
> > This memo defines a portion of the Management Information
> Base (MIB)
> > for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
> > In particular, it describes objects used for managing DS1, J1, E1,
> > DS2 and E2 interfaces. This document is a companion to the
> documents
> > that define Managed Objects for the DS0, DS3/E3 and Synchronous
> > Optical Network/Synchronous Digital Hierarchy (SONET/SDH) Interface
> > Types.
> >
> > This document obsoletes RFC 3895.
> >
> >
> >
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> > bis-00.txt
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