Re: Updating the MIB boilerplate

["David T. Perkins" <dperkins@dsperkins.com>]

HI,

At 06:54 AM 11/5/2002 -0800, you wrote:
>>>>>> On Mon, 4 Nov 2002 17:37:32 +0100 , "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com> said:
>
>Bert> 1.  The SNMP Management Framework
>
>Bert> For a detailed overview of the docments that describe the current
>Bert> Internet-Standard Management Framework, please refer to section 7
>Bert> of RFC2570bis [rfc2570bis].
>
>Bert> Managed objects are accessed via a virtual information store,
>Bert> termed the Management Information Base or MIB.  MIB objects are
>Bert> generally accessed through the Simple Network Management Protocol
>Bert> (SNMP).  Objects in the MIB are defined using the mechanisms
>Bert> defined in the Structure of Management Information (SMI).  This
>Bert> memo specifies a MIB module that is compliant to the SMIv2, which
>Bert> is described in STD 58, RFC 2578 [RFC2578], STD 58, RFC 2579
>Bert> [RFC2579] and STD 58, RFC 2580 [RFC2580].
>
>Looks good to me.  Except, I just noticed, "Objects in the MIB are" ->
>"Objects in a MIB are"
>            ^
>            ^
The next is correct as is. Its either "a MIB module" or "the MIB".

Regards,
/david t. perkins