Christophe,
thanks for the feedback.
here is a summary of the changes to the document.
see in line below.
abbie
-----Original Message-----
From: Christophe Deleuze [mailto:deleuze@ActiVia.net]
Sent: Tuesday, April 16, 2002 10:46 AM
To: cdn@ops.ietf.org
Subject: comments for WG Last Call:
draft-ietf-cdi-known-request-routing-00.txt
1. Introduction
>>> Too many spaces...
-------- abbie fixed.
----- SNIP
and responses for content. Content Networks rely on layer 7
protocols such as HTTP [4] OR RTP [8] for transport.
>>> This sentence seems to imply that RTP is a layer 7 protocol! But also
>>> look on my comment about SSL in section 4.1.
------------ abbie fixed the reference to RTP.
---- SNIP
4.1 Header Inspection
Applications such as HTTP [4], RTSP [3], and SSL [2] provide hints
>>> I may sound quibbling, but I would call HTTP and RTSP application level
>>> protocols rather than applications. As for SSL, [2] describes
>>> "Transport Layer Security" which doesn't sound "application". I guess
>>> that "application" in this document is to be understood as anything
>>> that's above the Internet standard transport protocols, TCP and UDP. If
>>> this is the case, this should probably be stated more explicitly
>>> (probably early in the document).
---- Abbie fixed to Application Level protocols.
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4.1.1 URL-Based Request-Routing
A Uniform Resource Locator (URL) [7] consists of a naming scheme
followed by a string whose format is a function of the naming
scheme. The string must start with a constant prefix "URL:".
>>> What? Here is what [7] says:
-------- Abbie I changed the text to just a reference to URL RFC.
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4.1.1.2 In-Path Element
[...]
The technique allows for the possibility of portioning the traffic
>>> pArtitioning
------- Abbie fixed.
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8. References
[...]
[5] Day, M., Cain, B. and G. Tomlinson, " A Model for Content
Internetworking (CDI)", http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
draft-day-cdnp-model-09.txt (Group Last Call).
>>> This is the old name of the draft.
--------- Abbie Fixed.
[6] Partridge, C., Mendez, T., Milliken W., "Host Anycasting
Service", RFC 1546, November 1993.
[7] Berners-Lee, T., Masinter, L., McCahill, M., "Uniform Resource
Locator (URL), RFC 1738,May 1994.
>>> LocatorS -- space typos
--------- Abbie Fixed.