I can't speak for the OSPF WG as a whole, but I have reviewed the subject
document and am very happy to see that the suggestion to use separate
inter-AS LSA types has been incorporated. I have no further technical
comments on the document and trust that the ccamp WG has verified that
this information encoding meets the TE requirements. The usage described
in sections 2.2 and 2.3 seem reasonable to me.
I have the following editorial comments:
1. Sections 3.3.2 and 3.3.2 - Both of these say "Use of the TE Router
ID is RECOMMENDED." I believe these should be respectively replaced by
"Use of the TE Router Address as specified in the Router Address TLV
[OSPF-TE] is RECOMMENDED." and "Use of the TE Router IPv6 Address as
specified in the IPv6 Router Address as specified in the IPv6 Router
Address TLV [OSPF-V3-TE] is RECOMMENDED."
2. Section 3.2.1 states "This is because... that may operate in a
different address space;". If they are using a different address space on
the link between the ASes, then I'd expect there to be problems with BGP
as well :^) I'd suggest:
"Given that OSPF is an IGP and should only be utilized between
routers in the same routing domain, the OSPF specific Link ID and
Neighbor ID sub-TLVs are not applicable to inter-AS links.".
3. You may want to expand some acronyms on their first use. For
example, "AS Boundary Router (ASBR)", "Link State Advertisement (LSA)"
and
"Path Computation Element (PCE)".
4. [OSPFV3] is listed to as both a Normative and Informative reference.
Thanks,
Acee
On Mar 19, 2008, at 2:06 PM, Adrian Farrel wrote:
Hi,
You may recall providing useful review and feedback on
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-interas-
te-extension-02.txt
The authors believe that they have taken on board all the comments
received
from the OSPF working group and have updated the draft accordingly.
CCAMP is holding a three week working group last call on this I-D along
with
its IS-IS partner document:
http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-ccamp-isis-interas-
te-extension-00.txt
These documents describe how to advertise the TE links that connect an
AS to
the outside world within the AS's IGP. As the drafts are at pains to
point
out, there is no proposal to advertise the TE information more widely
(such
as to other ASes).
The last call will end at 12 noon BST on April 9th 2008.
Please send your comments to the CCAMP list or direct to the CCAMP
chairs.
Thanks,
Adrian and Deborah
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