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Please publish draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-addressing-07.txt



Please publish draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-addressing-07.txt as an
Informational RFC.

Here is the Document Shepherd write-up.

(1.a)  Who is the Document Shepherd for this document?

      Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>

      Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version
      of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe
      this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for
      publication?

       Yes

(1.b)  Has the document had adequate review both from key WG
      members and from key non-WG members?

       Yes

      Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the
      depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed?

       No concerns.

(1.c)  Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document
      needs more review from a particular or broader perspective,
      e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar
      with AAA, internationalization or XML?

       No concerns.

(1.d)  Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or
      issues with this document that the Responsible Area
      Director and/or the IESG should be aware of?  For example,
      perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of
      the document, or has concerns whether there really is a
      need for it.  In any event, if the WG has discussed those
      issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance
      the document, detail those concerns here.

       No concerns.

      Has an IPR disclosure related to this document
      been filed?  If so, please include a reference to the
      disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion
      on this issue.

       None has been filed.

(1.e)  How solid is the WG consensus behind this document?  Does
      it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals,
      with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole
      understand and agree with it?

       WG agrees.

(1.f)  Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated
      extreme discontent?  If so, please summarise the areas of
      conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area
      Director.  (It should be in a separate email because this
      questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.)

       No.

(1.g)  Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the
      document satisfies all ID nits?  (See
      http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and
      http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/).  Boilerplate checks
      are not enough; this check needs to be thorough.

       Yes.

      Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs
      to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type and URI type
      reviews?

       Yes.

(1.h)  Has the document split its references into normative and
      informative?

       Yes.

      Are there normative references to documents that
      are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an
      unclear state?  If such normative references exist, what is
      the strategy for their completion?

       All OK.

      Are there normative references that are downward
      references, as described in [RFC3967]?  If so, list these
      downward references to support the Area Director in the
      Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967].

       No.

(1.i)  Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document IANA
      consideration section exists and is consistent with the
      body of the document?  If the document specifies protocol
      extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA
      registries?  Are the IANA registries clearly identified?
      If the document creates a new registry, does it define the
      proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation
      procedure for future registrations?  Does it suggest a
      reasonable name for the new registry?  See [RFC2434].

IANA section is correct. No IANA action required.
      If the document describes an Expert Review process has
      Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so
      that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during the IESG
      Evaluation?

       None required.

(1.j)  Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the
      document that are written in a formal language, such as XML
      code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly
      in an automated checker?

       Not applicable.

(1.k)  The IESG approval announcement includes a Document
      Announcement Write-Up.  Please provide such a Document
      Announcement Write-Up?  Recent examples can be found in the
      "Action" announcements for approved documents.  The
      approval announcement contains the following sections:

Technical Summary

  This document clarifies the use of addresses in Generalized
  Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS) networks. The aim is to
  facilitate interworking of GMPLS-capable Label Switching Routers
  (LSRs). The document is based on experience gained in implementation,
  interoperability testing, and deployment.

  The document describes how to interpret address and identifier fields
  within GMPLS protocols, and how to choose which addresses to set in
  those fields for specific control plane usage models. It also
  discusses how to handle IPv6 sources and destinations in the MPLS and
  GMPLS Traffic Engineering (TE) Management Information Base (MIB)
  modules.

Working Group Summary

 The Working Group had consensus on this document.

 However, there was considerable debate as to whether this should be an
Informational RFC, a BCP, or a Standards Track RFC. The WG was unable to get a clear understanding of how this document should fit in to the
 defined categories.
 - It was felt that much if not all of the clarifications present in
   this document were already present as procedural rules in existing
   RFCs (which are referenced). Thus, making this document Standards
   Track would have caused duplication of definitions. However, earlier
   versions of this document used RFC2119 language and that appeared to
   make it a Standards Track document.
 - BCP was seriously considered, however it was felt that for most of
   the clarifications the procedures were already defined in the
   referenced RFCs and so no BCP was strictly needed.
 Thus the document is requested for publication as an Informational RFC
 and has been appropriately updated so that no RFC2119 language is used.

Document Quality

 This document is based upon experience collected from implementers and
 from interoperability events.

Personnel

Who is the Document Shepherd for this document?

 Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>

Who is the Responsible Area Director(s)?

 Ross Callon, David Ward.

Is an IANA expert needed?

 No.

Thanks,
Adrian