Hi Adrian,
There were also these comments which have not been fully addressed
afaik:
3) The network models being used in section 4.3 and section 7 are
not clear. In particular the relationships between the call
controllers, network boundaries, ingress/egress nodes, and
ingress/egress links are not clear. Figures would be very helpful
here.
Figures are always helpful, and usually (but not always) better than
words.
In order to be sure to clarify the network models that you are finding
confusing, it would be helpful if you asked specific questions or
roposed text.
It is not clear how the form of initiation of a call affects the
information available about the egress link. In part this may be
affected by whether the ingress node is inside or outside the network
(IGP) boundary. It would seem that the situation at the egress would
have something to do with this as well. It is unclear where the egress
trail termination point is expected to be, e.g. inside or outside the
network boundary, and, if inside, at the near or far side of the egress
node's matrix.
>5) The call control mechanism defined appears to support
> only IPv4 or IPv6 addressed endpoints from a single address
> space. Is this correct?
I don't think so.
I would be interested to know how to correctly understand the draft.
That is, what addressing other than IPv4/6 is supported, and how
multiple address spaces are supported.