draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-13.txt

["Tom Petch" <nwnetworks@dial.pipex.com>]

A stray doubt or so on this:-(

1) RFC2434 is referenced in the IANA considerations but not in the list of
references.

2) p.2   ..advandtage ...

3) I am confused by the enumeration gmplsFreeformLabel(3); this also appears in
the DESCRIPTION of GmplsLabelTypeTC in draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt but
I see no such enumeration defined.  Should this be
gmplsFreeformGeneralizedLabel(3)?

4) p.8 ...  accsesible ...
Presumably, this will always be gmplsLabelType(4) for mplsInSegmentLabelPtr and
mplsOutSegmentLabelPtr

5) I think that on p.23,
     ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX }
should be
     ::= { mplsStdMIB ZZZ }
in order to conform to the instructions to the RFC Editor (I know, they are
intelligent enough to get it right but I do like things to be as simple as
possible)

6) Likewise, I think that on p.12,
     ::= { mplsStdMIB XXX }
should be
     ::= { mplsStdMIB YYY }
in order to conform to the instructions to the RFC editor

7) I notice that references to the tc-mib are variously to it as its
to-be-assigned RFC number - eg p.22 - or to it as [GMPLSTCMIB] - eg p.21; not a
problem, I
assume that this is a matter of style.

Tom Petch