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Here is one more comment on the draft-ietf-v6ops-802-16-deployment-scenarios-01.txt

Thanks much Basavaraj Patil.

Hope this helps too.

Daniel (Soohong Daniel Park)
Mobile Convergence Laboratory, SAMSUNG Electronics.

 
> My review comments:
> 
> 
> Review of I-D: draft-ietf-v6ops-802-16-deployment-scenarios-01.txt
> 
> General:
> 
> The document is poorly written and makes a lot of assumptions. It also
> does not take into consideration the fact that IPv6 can be transported
> directly over the MAC (IP specific part of the packet CS), over 802.3
> of the packet CS or 802.1Q part of the packet CS. Given the variants,
> the deployment models vary. The fact is that IEEE std 802.16 has
> specified the means to transport IPv6 over the air interface between a
> host and a BS. The network models and deployments that are possible
> are numerous and this document does not do justice in explaining
> this. 
> The document is not really useful from a deployment of IPv6
> perspective at all.
> 
> - The introduction section mentions 802.16 as applicable for
>  stationary networks only. It is better to clarify the variants of
>  IEEE 802.16 specifications (i.e .16d, .16e and possibly others in
>  the future). Comments such as "IEEE 802.16e is one of the most
>  promising access technologies...." are unnecessary in the context of
>  this document.
> 
> - The introduction section needs to be reworked to just focus on what
>  this document is discussing instead of speculations about
>  deployments and capabilities.
> 
> - The title of Section 2 and the text in that section appear to be
>  mismatched. 
> 
> - In section 2.1:
> "   The IEEE 802.11 access network (WLAN) has driven the revolution of
>   wireless communication.  However, the more people use it the more its
>   limitations such as short range and lack of mobility support arose.
>   Compared with such IEEE 802.11 network, IEEE 802.16 supports enhanced
>   features such as wider coverage and mobility.  So it is expected that
>   IEEE 802.16 network could be the next step of IEEE 802.11 network.
> "
> 
>  This statement is irrelevant and speculative. Is of no value here.
> 
> - Statement: 
>  "   The mechanism of transporting IP traffic over IEEE 802.16 networks is
>   outlined in [IEEE802.16],"
> 
>  IEEE 802.16 std only specifies the convergence sublayers and the
>  ability to transport IP over the air interface. Beyond that it does
>  not specify anything about the network for either IPv4 or IPv6. The
>  statement above gives the impression that only IPv6 operation is not
>  specified by 802.16 specs.
> 
> - The definition of MS is not clear. "In motion or during halts" needs
>  to be better explained. It is better to refer to the terms in the
>  16NG problem statement I-D.
> 
> - Definition of BS leaves much to be desired. Again recommend the use
>  of the definition from the 16NG PS I-D.
> 
> - Figure 1 is just an example. There are many different models for
>  802.16 technology. As an example, the BS can be connected directly
>  to a BRAS which then provides IP connectivity. IP is transported
>  over Ethernet between the MS and BS and to the BRAS. So only showing
>  the figure 1 implies that this is the only model which is not true.
> 
> - In section 2.2, the description of the issue about the PMP nature of
>  the 802.16 link and the issue as applicable to IPv6 is not
>  clear. Lack of multicast capability on the uplink is not considered
>  an issue for IPv6. It just implies a different link model.
> 
> - The reasoning why the IETF should specify IPv6 operation is
>  vague. In section 2.2, bullet 2, there is mention of classifiers,
>  MAC payload and other terms which do not make sense without a proper
>  explanation. 
> 
> - There is a claim that IEEE 802.16 is different as compared to 802.11
>  or 3G. How is it different? After all 802.16 is just another
>  air-interface specification.
> 
> - In bullet 3 the statement:
> "The specification of IEEE 802.16 defines several
>   CSs for carrying IP packets, but does not provide a detailed
>   description of how to carry them.  The several CSs are generally
>   classified into two types of CS: IPv6 CS and Ethernet CS.
> "
> 
>  802.16 describes how IP payload is transported over the air
>      interface. This is the scope of the spec and that is all that is
>      needed. So the above claim is incorrect. Also there is only the
>      ATM CS and the Packet CS. IP(v4/v6), Ethernet and 802.3 are all part
>      of the packet CS. There is no IPv6 CS and Eth CS.
> 
> - In section 2.2.1 there is the statement:
>  "This use case will be implemented only with the licensed spectrum."
> 
>  It refers to the mobility support. I do not understand why mobility
>  will be supported only in the licensed spectrum. This is an invalid
>  statement. 
> 
> - Why the reference to WiMAX and Wibro in sec 2.2.1? This is supposed
>  to be a document describing generic .16 deployment models.
> 
> - Section 2.2.1.1 talks about upgrading the MS, BS, AR and ER to dual
>  stack. Why? Does not make any sense.
>  
> - Sec 2.2.1.3 mentions that IPv6 should be transported directly over
>  the 802.16 MAC and not over Ethernet. There is no proper
>  justification. Both are possible and are options for IPv6
>  deployment.
> 
> - In Sec 2.2.1.3:
> "Native IPv6 should be preferred over tunneling
>   mechanisms as native IPv6 deployment option might be more scalable
>   and provide required service performance.
> " 
>  Not clear why this recommendation.
> 
> - Sec 2.2.1.4 should take into consideration hosts such as CPEs which
>  can act as routers. There are many variants of an MS.
> 
> - In Section 2.2.1.5 the statement:
> "   As for mobility management, the movement between BSs is handled by
>   Mobile IPv6 [RFC3775], if it requires a subnet change.  Also, in
>   certain cases (e.g., fast handover [I-D.ietf-mipshop-fmipv6-
>   rfc4068bis]) the link mobility information must be available for
>   facilitating layer 3 handoff procedure.
> "
> 
>  The authors are making a very long-shot judgement about the mobility
>  models that are possible.
> 
> - In sec 2.2.2
> "Many wireless
>   Internet service providers (Wireless ISPs) have planned to use IEEE
>   802.16 for the purpose of high quality broadband wireless service
> "
>  Is this even needed?
> 
> - Sec 2.2.2.1 again mentions infrastructure changes. What
>  infrastructure is intended to be upgraded? The dual-stack
>  requirement is invalid. It depends on the deployment environment.
> 
> 
> -Basavaraj