RE: document coming around one more time

["Lai, Wai S (Waisum), ALSVC" <wlai@att.com>]

Tom,
  Agreed on first two points.
  What do you mean by "QOS in IPv6"?
Thanks, Wai Sum.

-----Original Message-----
From: Tom Reddington [mailto:treddington@bell-labs.com]
Sent: Thursday, July 12, 2001 2:45 PM
To: Lai, Wai S (Waisum), ALSVC
Cc: tewg-dt@ops.ietf.org
Subject: Re: document coming around one more time




4.3

A common strategy is to associate each working entity with a protection
entity
having either dedicated pre-reserved resources or shared resources that are
pre-reserved or reserved-on-demand.

Aren't dedicated and pre-reserved the same? I think so, so look for
consistency throughout the document.

5.2.1

In this protection mode, the head end of a working connection establishes
also
a protection connection to the destination
to
In this protection mode, the head end of a working connection establishes a
protection connection to the destination

5.3
<Comment: It might be useful to adopt the lannguage of QOS in IPv6 for next
iteration>