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RE: COMMENT: draft-ietf-radext-status-server



Alan,
 
I have not seen any response from you to the issues raised in the DISCUSS and COMMENT made by the different AD's. The IESG telechat is scheduled for today at 11:30AM ET. Are you on line and preparing answers to the issues raised?
 
Thanks and Regards,
 
Dan
 


From: owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org [mailto:owner-radiusext@ops.ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bernard Aboba
Sent: Thursday, April 22, 2010 4:25 AM
To: radiusext@ops.ietf.org
Subject: COMMENT: draft-ietf-radext-status-server


> From: housley@vigilsec.com
> To: iesg@ietf.org
> CC: Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr; radext-chairs@tools.ietf.org; draft-ietf-radext-status-server@tools.ietf.org
> Date: Wed, 21 Apr 2010 18:22:24 -0700
> Subject: COMMENT: draft-ietf-radext-status-server
>
> Comment:
>
> Please consider the comments from the Gen-ART Review by Francis Dupont:
>
> - Abstract page 2: there is an explicit reference to a RFC, this is in
> general forbidden but IMHO we are here in the allowed exception case.
>
> - 2.1.1 page 8: a servers policy -> a server policy
>
> - 3 page 10 (twice): etc. -> etc., ???
>
> - 4.2 page 13: adminstrators -> administrators
>
> - 4.2 page 15 (twice): e.g. -> e.g.,
>
> - 4.3 page 16: modelled -> modeled
>
> - 4.3 page 16: usually the hysteresis against flapping tries to keep
> the connection (i.e., failover after 3 missed responses), here it is
> the opposite. IMHO it is very aggressive but it is how RFC 3539 works
> so I have no concern about it.
>
> - 4.5 page 16: Proxyhas -> Proxy has
>
> - 4.5 page 17: cannot, -> cannot
>
> - 4.5 page 18: i.e. -> i.e.,
>
> - 5 page 19: EAP-MEssage -> EAP-Message
>
> - 8 page 23: synthesise -> synthesize
>
> - 8 page 23: in "the suggestion of [RFC5080] Section 2.2.2, which suggests"
> suggests -> proposes
>
> - 8 page 23: configurably is not in my dict?
>
> - 9.2 page 23: IMHO the RFC2119 reference should be moved to normative
> references section (perhaps others too?)
>
> - Authors' Addresses -> Author's Address
>