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Re: Response to various comments from Russ Housley
On Tue, 17 Feb 2004, George Jones wrote:
> > Date and Time: 2004-01-22, 10:45:13
> > Version: 03
> > Commented by: Housley, Russ
> > State before Comment: 0
> > State after Comment: 0
> > Comment: Delete last sentence in Abstract.
> > Replace 'insure' with 'ensure' throughtout the document.
> OK. Done. But http://www.m-w.com/cgi-bin/dictionary?book=Dictionary&va=ensure
> claims that they are interchangable in most situations.
Consistency with other IETF documents is good. RFC 2828 does not contain
the word "insure".
> > The
> > document uses [PKCS.3.1993] as a reference for Diffie-Hellman. It
> > should also reference RFC 2631.
> > Use of '*must*' ought to be replaced with either 'must' or 'MUST'.
> The use of "*must*" in the justificaiton section was not a requirement
> per se. Justification has been reworded without "must":
> 2.3.1 Support a 'Console' interface
> Justification. There are times when it is operationally necessary
> to be able to immediately and easily access a device for management
> or configuration, even
> > Delete the last paragraph of
> > Appendix B. It begins: 'Version: $Id:'
> ---George Jones