review of draft-ietf-netconf-partial-lock-01

[Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>]

- General: This document is already in a reasonably good shape.

- Where does NETCONF define what an instance identifier is? Is this
  the right place for such a definition in case there is no official
  definition yet?

- Is 'string' the right data type for the leaf-list 'select'? Should
  we extend the common YANG type definition modules to have more
  suitable types readily available?

- Add more descriptions to the YANG module; should there also be more
  defined types, e.g. a type for the lockId instead of using uint32
  everywhere?

- The notion seems to be inconsistent in the usage of camel notation;
  would help consistency to pick a convention and then stick to it.

- I did not bother to read the XSD.

/js

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