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RE: WHo can do MIB doctor review for: draft-ietf-ipsp-spd-mib-01. txt
This revision 01 is now in the repository.
It is 65 pages... probably needs serious review.
Harry, if you can review, then I would appreciate that.
I did a very quick check on the beginning of the doc
and already reported:
SMICng tells me:
W: f(spd.mi2), (67,21) The first revision should match the
last update for MODULE-IDENTITY spdMIB
Yopu may want to check some otehr dates/timestanmps as well
E: f(spd.mi2), (215,4) Item "spdEndGroupDirection" has invalid
value for MAX-ACCESS
E: f(spd.mi2), (879,4) Item "spdTrueFilter" must not have items
registered below it
W: f(spd.mi2), (2086,20) Item "spdPacketPart" should have SIZE
W: f(spd.mi2), (115,4) Textual convention "SpdIPPacketLogging"
defined but not used
*** 2 errors and 3 warnings in parsing
Sect 4.1.2 is using net 10 addresses as examples.
Pls see RFC3330 for IP addresses to be used in examples.
I.e. they should be in 192.0.2.0/24
I see IPSec at some places. I kniow that at least one of the SEC
ADs wants it to be IPsec!!
Sect 4.1.2 I see
spdEndGroupRowStatus = 5) -- createAndGo
Mmm... I though that createAndGo is 4!!
spdIncomingPolicyGroupName is read-write but I see not explanantion
w.r.t. the persistence behaviour
Description clause MUST (according to RFC2579) explain which
columns must be writable for permanent rows!
same for other StorageType objects
DESCRIPTION clause says:
Values of unknown, ipv4z, ipv6z and dns are not legal
values for this object."
I would like to see that represented in the MODULE-COMPLIANCE.
It even seem you only allow ipv4 and ipv6 given the size constraint
in the InetAddress itself.
The above is just a very very quick scan at the beginning of the document.
I'll see if I can find a MIB doctor for detailed review.
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Harrie Hazewinkel [mailto:firstname.lastname@example.org]
> Sent: Monday, October 18, 2004 11:01
> To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
> Cc: Mreview (E-mail)
> Subject: Re: WHo can do MIB doctor review for:
> Hi Bert,
> I just wanted to take a look on the size of the document, but it does
> not seem to be in the repository anymore.
> > This Internet-Draft has been deleted. Unrevised documents
> placed in the
> > Internet-Drafts directories have a maximum life of six months. After
> > that time, they are deleted. This Internet-Draft was not
> published as
> > an RFC.
> > The name of the internet-draft was draft-ietf-ipsp-spd-mib-00.txt
> > Internet-Drafts are not an archival document series, and expired
> > drafts, such as this one, are not available; please do not ask for
> > copies... they are not available. The Secretariat does not have
> > information as to future plans of the authors or working
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> > For more information or a copy of the document, contact the
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> > Draft Author(s):
> > Wesley Hardaker <email@example.com>