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Re: FW: Updating the MIB boilerplate
>>>>> Wijnen, Bert (Bert) writes:
Bert> OK, I have seen a number of supportive statements for the text
Bert> (new MIB Boiler plate) below. I have not heard any objections
Bert> yet. If there are any, please speak up ASAP.
Just a nit:
Is the section title "The SNMP Management Framework" still the correct
name or are we now calling the section the "Internet-Standard
Management Framework" as the first sentence and reference RFC2570bis
seem to imply? From a stylisitic point, it is not really good to use
an acronym in a section header before it is actually introduced.
Juergen Schoenwaelder <http://www.informatik.uni-osnabrueck.de/schoenw/>